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Visual novel Testing : (Neverland) by Nathaniel-Aoife Visual novel Testing : (Neverland) by Nathaniel-Aoife
Orion, One of the dateable guy XD
Isn't he cute?



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Story plot:

A sickly girl who had suffered from Hemochromatosis since young...
As she grew older, the sickness became worse.

Her whole family decided to take her to a surgery.
Which only have 25% chances of survival.


Just in one night,
She felt that, maybe it time for her to go.

Suddenly, a man in black enter into her ward,
through the window.
Telling her a hope...

But for one condition...
Which is to trade her very soul,
For the entrance,
To "Neverland"

And to get what she wants.

She will have to search for a way to revive the Ruler of Neverland.
Which is to....
Get the heart of Nea and served to the Ruler.

By not letting people who lived in "NeverLand"
Know she is "Alice"...
Or her contract will be nullify.

And once she completed that task she will be
Awarded with one wish...

What will she wish for:



Her health?
Or Something else?
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:iconsada0606:
sada0606 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
omg i would love to play this game!I love the art style alot
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD But sadly this game has bugs. Hope one day I have the time to remake this thing again :'( sigh.
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:iconfelicityflannery:
FelicityFlannery Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gosh it looks stunning! I can't wait to play it!
Hope it comes out soon :D
I'm so inpatient,sorry >.<
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:iconprincess-dark-angel:
Princess-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Is this finished? *--* I want to play it!
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:iconabigail03:
abigail03 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Wow, looks so exciting! I hope it comes out soon, keep it up! :)
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:iconsteredice:
Steredice Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I keep an eye on it~
Really interesting story and it seems to have a decent quality of sprites/backgrounds.
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Hahahha, Thanks :D
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:iconsteredice:
Steredice Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome. :)
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:iconferris4673:
Ferris4673 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i wanna play that game! Sounds very intresting!!! And he's a really cutieXD
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha, Thanks for the compliment but you might to wait.
I have some problem with the system.
And some routing problem due to too many endings and a total of 6 Dateable guys.
Some of the sprites are still undone.
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:iconferris4673:
Ferris4673 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
don't worry i'm good at waiting;)
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Hehe, Thanks for the wait :D
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:iconferris4673:
Ferris4673 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob, i am allready aiting for tons of other visual novels to come outXD
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:icondragoncactus:
DragonCactus Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Writer
He is so cute.
Story sounds very interesting. And I like the way this is colored. Looks great!
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks alot :D
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:iconazurextwilight-rllz:
azureXtwilight-rllz Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks nice, but why is the face in the box and the sprite looks different?
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks :D
The sprites in the box, I would to leave it unchanged.
So people will look at the bigger sprites than the one in the box.
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:iconhollysutterlin:
hollysutterlin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
she can bring them back...

For one condition. what the condition for her to get ever thing back?
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
That condition will be...
She will have to search for a way to revive the Ruler of Neverland
and she will be granted a wish in exchange of her short span life as a trade.
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:iconhollysutterlin:
hollysutterlin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
so there no way for her to get a longer life span?
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Hehe, no spoiler XD
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:iconhollysutterlin:
hollysutterlin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
awww man that to bad any way will there be demo be for the full game?
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
If possible I would like to make a full game :D
It is a free one, of course.
But I need to spare some time on the making it,
As now, I am only just starting XD
It is barely a demo yet.
The script, Cgs, sprite has yet to be done.
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:iconhollysutterlin:
hollysutterlin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
cool can't wait to see what the demo going to be like i hope you update on here
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:iconnathaniel-aoife:
Nathaniel-Aoife Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Hehe, sure :D
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